ext_30118 ([identity profile] darthmokona.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] icebear_cw 2009-01-16 12:11 am (UTC)

This was really good--I love the possessive Sam dynamic because it seems to work in well with where the show's been at since S3, and especially since the episode where we saw him all broken up and borderline suicidal in those missing four months. In seasons 1 and 2, I think Dean would have been the more possessive one, but you made S4 Sam work.

And I don't mean to be rude, but I noticed a few typos/misspelling/grammar mistakes, so I'll beta this if you want. If not, it's still completely understandable, so if it's fine with you as is that's cool. =D

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